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My name is Wangjing.I am 19 years old.At the age of 15,I could make some difficult things for myself.When i studing at school,my teacher think highly of me.I taking on defy with pleasure.I must step up my capability for the short time.Although i understanding the road which leads to success is trying,but i don't give up my belief.However,i have studious achive to my aim----Familiar project evolutive stronger.
Talking about hobbies,I like making friends very much.Wherever the new place is.I always make many new friends,Living company with them i am very happy.I like tasting colourful jobs,like venturing,I feel that is very exciting and amusing.For the gymnastic sports.I like football than the other sports.Every four years.The World Cup making many fans exciting very much.I think that i love football.
I think the individual capability is very important.How stronger the organization?It is the members of organization.Studing abraod can not only st
At the age of 15,I could make some difficult things for myself
改为At the age of 15,I could make some things for myself though it were difficult.
When i studing at school,my teacher think highly of me.I taking on defy with pleasure
改为When i studied at school,my teacher thought highly of me.I was taking on defy with pleasure
Although i understanding the road which leads to success is trying,but i don't give up my belief.
改为Although i understanding the road which leads to success is trying,i don't give up my belief.
Talking about hobbies,I like making friends very much
改为Talking about hobbies,I like making friends with others
Wherever the new place is删去
Living company with them i am very happy
改为stay with them made me very happy
The World Cup making many fans exciting very much
改为The World Cup making many fans exciting
How stronger the organization?
改为How stronger the organization is?
I must have stronger